Sunday, September 7, 2008

the rabbit preview

a preview for my next short story.



the rabbit


my heart is pounding, my blood is boiling, I am being hunted, my eyes are bloodshot, i gulp. i hear footsteps, I am breathing heavy I am afraid, very afraid. I can fell it, it’s coming for me, I am going insane!!! I draw a small pocket blade and wait. in my world everything is black and white, but that rainbow colored rabbit is not, why is coming for me!?! Then it came! it was flying with its ears. I pulled out a gun and shot it. But nothing happened, I shouted

“why”

the rabbit sneered and spoke “you are chosen my friend Owen”

“for what!?” I shouted

“to make the world colored”

“WHY!?! WHY!?!?!”

“just come with me.”

the rabbit pointed his ear at me and shot color at me. I awoke in a new world. I blinked and I saw color. it was wonderfull.    

3 comments:

jaredkk said...

beautiful story man.
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mtgzuby said...

friggin rabbits


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